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hanging in the winds

hanging in the wind

hanging in the winds
the winds of lve
the winds of pain
the winds of hope
waiting for the rain
hanging in the winds
neither flying
nor touched the grounds
the winds of fear
the winds of hurt
breaking me down
and am getting tired
hanging in the winds
but hanging on to faith
fighting that fear
one day I'll reach the earth
                                Yassmin Elnazer

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  • Kelli Marie
    March 13, 2008

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    A great write. The repetitive line of "hanging in the winds" work very well here. In the second line you have 'lve' instead of love.
    Kelli