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I feel alone.

I love you baby, you're the inspiration that gets me through the day,
and without your love I would surely die and would feel so alone.

Without your love the sky would fall, and the clouds would cry,
and this man wouldn't be much of a man at all.

Without you here by my side,
I would fall right down into the ocean below.

I would feel my sides ready to burst.
Without you, I feel alone.

Please be up front and honest and tell me what you think.

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  • Super-GOREgous
    March 13, 2008
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    no!

    DONT BE ALONE......Great Work! -Georgia


  • Kelli Marie
    March 13, 2008

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    What a wonderful love poem. To have such a love is a true blessing. We get lost without having them near. Great write.
    Kelli