she radiates
like a red sun in a phoenix sky
exposed to the world
and bold to ones eyes
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Short by very descriptive. Great choice of words. Thank you for sharing.
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A lot said in a few words.. Very good..
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Now this is an expression that can be seen in many a different light I would think in my few I see an artistic form a naked woman maybe possing sunburnt on a beach for a painter with his brush capturing her beauty. A very thought prevoking Poem (HM)
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..oh something is left..lol
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Ah,,indeed a piece to ponder and to roam in the images..I love this pice..tahnks f or sharing and commenting on my verse as well..
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Wonderful job on this one. I like the use of the metephors and how th message is still clear.
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This is wonderful. I loved how you have managed to say so much in so few words. I love the line "like a red sun in a phoenix sky". Well done.
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thank you sweet friend
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The fabulous Phoenix always rises from the ashes to fly once more into the sky.
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Very good
Carries a complete thought and a comparison that allows the reader to expand a visual picture. (GOOD)
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A lot said in so few words.
Very good
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Excellent!
A beautiful thought you weaved like a dream.
Thanks for sharing you, always a pleasure sweet soul.
-Timothy
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cute ,,just like you ,, dear raggy what is phonex ? xx
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Lovely flow and metaphor, very beautiful in so few words...nicely done...
mystic
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The eager lips await the tender warmth like a spring morning anew
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hi bob
thank you
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Oh, a beautiful write. I like the metaphor. You've done a beautiful job with just a few words. Very nice.
Kelli
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