Imagery abundant:
A heart curled tight and closely guarded
awaiting daylights first born rays.
quietly unfurls in morning dew,
worshiping the golden God.
Opening arms, unfolding slowly.
She embraces life completely.
Clothes of magical hues,
releasing burgundy shadows.
In her heart she holds close
the needs of her fellow man.
listening and helping,
advising and healing.
this wonderful Rose
looks out on her morn,
smiling and singing
her message to the world.
An Empathic Rose.
A wondrous gift.
bringing joy to her friends,
support to strangers,
love to family,
and asking nothing in return.
An Empathic Rose
In her garden of words
laughing.
Author notes
This is for you Steff.....for your help and inspiration to be here writing every night....Thanks
Simon
A contest entry
- Thank you for favouring me! =) by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended March 26, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Whatever you like...
Comments
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This is such a sweet poem, it is so heartfelt and beautiful, I definately think its special anyway! Thanks so much for caring and writing a dedication poem, it means a lot to me
. Thanks Simon, I wish you the best x
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oh bro this is such a beautiful piece. your words speaks deep and beautiful love for a beautiful person. you have such a caring heart
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What a great read this one is!! One of your best! I love dedication poems, and this one captures the recipient quite well!!
Best of luck in this contest!
Nevermore~
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whoa!
this write is sooo beautiful. the first stanze sets if off nicely.. >.< wow! this is a wonderful tribute to your friend... well done!! <3<3<3<3
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