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Tournesol

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Bright yellow rays of sunshine
they illuminate your day
evoking warmth and happiness
an alluring flower bouquet

Their leaves are shaped like giant hearts
they stand so proud and majestic
with their faces raised to the Lord
basking in its glow - I find it poetic

Birds are feasting on their seeds
wrens and finches join the throng
It's not important how they sing
just that they share their song.




Author notes

Tournesol - French word for sunflower...meaning
follow the sun

Prompt:

It's not important how they sing
just that they share their song.



Thanks to the friend that gave me this prompt.

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  • astralshepherd gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    if i could sing a song like this then, perhaps, it would not be so empty in this field.

    blessings and best wishes,

  • Poet-treeman
    March 14, 2008
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    This was so sweet and beautiful. I know the tournesols are edified as well. Thank you.


  • Wandika gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    Very nice

    It will be some time before the Tournesol look as your picture. I plant about 5 acres of them for the doves.

    Jim


  • Mari Goes
    March 13, 2008

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    We call it girasol in Portuguese
    Your poem is refreshing and such a lovely preview to Spring. Welcome back posting


  • KayJay
    March 13, 2008
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    Beautiful - not too "flowery"

    The wait was worth it... glad your song is back. Even in your absence, your voice was still heard.

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