As we float on this abyssal plain
memories assault us
feelings rational and real about our
death-
only plaintive thoughts
stretching from the beginning
to the end of
time-
endless and senseless
causing us to live our regrets
over and over in
hell-
torment, burning and true
unreal yet as we live
out of body
we are there in our body
we see how we let the days run
into years and years
only increasing our agony
our struggles in the life before
are nothing
just the innocent pleasures of the past
yet our bodies are trapped
doubly
here and there
in heaven and hell
which shall we choose?
A contest entry
- OPTIONS AND THE BLESSED DARK ANGEL by Devilish Temptation.
600 points, ended March 19, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
6- Poetry is the best for letting things out
Comments
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Way to go! OMG touched me so much this is a talented piece of poetry thank you very much for entering
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