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Rainy

Dark rainy nights,I
feel like screaming sometimes,I
just miss you so much

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it's my first haiku :-s

A contest entry

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  • rosie4491
    August 7, 2008

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    Nice job on a first haiku... but It's not quite right for this contest. Best of luck though!

    Keep it up =]


  • Nephlim
    July 21, 2008

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    I kind of like how you ended both the first and second line with I, very fluid overall =].
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly


  • Sushi Darville
    April 25, 2008

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    Wonderful. I love haiku's, and the rain. =) I can relate with the "feel like screaming sometimes," lol.


  • whbybel
    March 15, 2008
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    rainy

    rain rain go away unless your acid then I open my mouth to pray.


  • MyDecember
    March 14, 2008
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    well, i think its great

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