(Broken.)
Broken wings,
broken heart,
broken cries in the dark
(Tainted.)
Tainted soul
your acid lies
because
the truths you said were blurred,
they crashed
Now I don't know what's real,
(what's not)
Confused,
corrode,
broken up.
Can't let the decay get to my soul
my mind is fading,
stirred,
putrefied.
Leave me alone,
forsaken vamp
your lust of blood
has made me die
now in this grave I'm doomed
forever
(and a day)
Author notes
Selene
Pain
“GUMMY BEARS WILL SOON TAKE OVER THE WORLD”
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great, but you forgot the quote...you can add it in your authors notes then re-enter tomorrow
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yeah! it's true! sorry :-s I'm going to re-enter thanks for the comment ^^
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It had a very nice flow to it. =] The emotion was simply wonderful. Very well written. ^-^ awesome write.
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This does not have enough trophies.
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Wow great emotion coming off of this short and sweet piece...
its really descriptive... but short enough so the reader doesn't get bored.
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Excellent flow and scheme. Imaginative use of vocabulary and musical flavored construction. It allowed ample personal perspective and held my attention. Thanks for the great read.
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line 19 do you mean petrified
but other than that it arealy good lyrical poem i hear music whyen i read it
im glad you entered this contest
miya
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no, I meant putrefied,ransacked...
putrefied:
v.intr.
1. To become decayed and have a foul odor.
2. To become gangrenous.
^^ thanks for the comment
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