Deep inside the pits of hell,
volcano's erupt and lava swells.
Expelled to the surface, with a vile rasp,
mortals now within easy grasp.
Hell hounds trail the scent of souls,
pure and corrupt equally exposed.
Scales fall from the leathery hides,
insanity flames in scarlet eyes.
Inside walls of thunder and pain,
silenced and crushed are throbbing veins.
The crust shatters as the earth shakes,
broken bodies left in their wake.
Our world now at its worst,
trapped within a demonic curse.
Barren and desolate, rivers run red.
End of the world, now land of the dead.
Author notes
1. Write a poem based on the end of the world!
Fantasy style. If it is not what you are looking for feel free to DQ
"Poetry is the best for letting things out"
A contest entry
- OPTIONS AND THE BLESSED DARK ANGEL by Devilish Temptation.
600 points, ended March 19, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
Very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Glad it will be over in a flash!
Don't want to be one of the so called Lucky ones..lol
Good luck in the contest.
All the best,
~T.S~
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Yay.. dark and scary as hell!!!! Wicked background too hunny.. oohhh I loved:
"Scales fall from the leathery hides,
insanity flames in scarlet eyes"
Yikes!!! You always know how to give the reader a chill!!!!
Wahooooo
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Very vivid imagery -
Full of dread and terror.
Awesome!
Great write!
~Pastel
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awesome write...i loved it..
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It's great and powerful beyond words I LOVE IT my friend thankx for sharing and entering coz you are a talented writer
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damn
the Apocalypse in your words....i hope i'm dead first
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Hehe I'm sure we all will be, but it would be a shame to miss such an awesome show...
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