Can't see past the open flames,
To you across the way,
Though y9our silhouette is there,
I cannot see your face,
I wish your eyes in my mind,
Looking onto my face,
Need entering your gaze,
Like the flames hold me,
Mesmerized,
Entranced,
My body your embers,
Keep you starving for air,
The heat making you dazed,
Knowing,
After all this time,
It is you I've craved.
A contest entry
- Tell Me of Your Misery by thedarkestjolly.
315 points, ended May 6, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-writes, new poems, Anything by Never.Give.Up.
525 points, ended September 24, 2008, 104 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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It was an ok short poem. Good luck in the contest!
(remember to check your spelling)
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