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Heaven's A Whore






Death loves the lonely
Blood’s into Greed
Religion’s a merry-go-round


Blasphemer runs the harem house
Plague, he runs the streets


Terror is the law now
Poison’s beauty queen
Insanity’s  the driver here
And Killer likes his speed

The Devil’s a bastard
God’s a fuckin’ bore
I’m prime evil
And Heaven is my whore

Monster’s are  gentlemen
Bitch’s  deities
Vampire  crucifix
Black Mail likes to preach

Murder’s the game here
Demons’ are the dealers
Wisdom’s the currency
But Ignorance comes cheaper

Money is a nympho
Regret likes to swallow
Suicide’s  into strap-ons
And Fame’s a bitter show to follow

The Devil’s a bastard
God’s a fuckin’ bore
I’m prime evil
And Heaven is my whore

Hatred is a missionary
Passion beats the weak
Love lies a lot
And Misery can’t stand the heat

Violence is music
War’s a symphony
Nuke’s got a violin
And Pesticide keeps the beat

Massacre’s a mother now
Genocide’s the father
Martyrdom’s a whiner
And  Joy’s just a liar


The Devil’s a bastard
God’s a fuckin’ bore
I’m prime evil
And Heaven is my whore









Author notes

This song is black metal so you might find the rythme a bit wierd unless you like Dimmu Borger, but just picture it in music similar to Serpantine Offering though not quite. I hope you'll be able to hear the single soon.

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  • Karayan
    August 12, 2008

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    I loved this one so much, I had to bookmark it to share it. thanks for sharing this one, and again, congrats on the gold.
  • thenorthernstar
    June 28, 2008
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    good damn baby girl this kicks sooooooo much ass!

  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    the rhyme scheme wasn't too bad. full of imagery and metaphors. nicely written.

  • poetrytoopeneyes
    March 17, 2008

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    WOah, I love it. So true. >.< This should be a song, I would listen to it. "And Heaven is my whore" definitely awesome...

  • Mori-lux
    March 15, 2008

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    nice :]

    I like it! My music tastes are all over the place, but founded in rock.. I haven't exactly fallen for black metal yet but it's still realy cool. I like the chorus verse the best.
    Good job
    Good luck
    Thanks for entering.

    • Night Terrors
      March 18, 2008
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      Lol well I'm glad you like it. I understand about black metal it kinda grows on you though

      Thanks for the comment
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