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Vengeance

 

For all she has endured,

and all she'd been witness to~

She returns in kind

your actions back to you

 

Gathered over time,

the ammunition used~

Cartridges left behind

are you still amused?

 

Weaving her magic spell

tempered with rage~

Now it's your turn

to be on center stage

 

She strikes with certainty

her intent is to maim

Best you not forget, 

Vengeance is her name 

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  • Gypsie Ink
    March 18, 2008

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    Powerful

    Message is clear and story told, doesn't stop us from being so bold. Thank you for your entry and Best of luck in the contest.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    Ohh beautifully dark and broody but soft all at the same time, gorgeous take on the prompt with this one, everyone needs a moment in the light... goodluck in the contest

    Karen


  • Desire gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    Holy Moly!!

    This is a Marvelous piece of work and love the rhyme also the message~ and images stained the Mind

    Weaving her magic spell
    tempered with rage~
    Now it's your turn
    to be on center stage

    Loved this one!! Powerful~~
    Oy!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    Wow this is a good strong piece, wonderful imagery. I love the ending, superbly penned, good luck


  • Stickboy
    March 13, 2008

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    this is awesome I love it thanks for sharing this with me
    Sean


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    wow

    though i do not believe in vengeance this is a strong fantasy piece. well done tough rhyming scheme. God bless you my friend, Mark

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