Steel eyes burn
as she was burned
slowly.
A contest entry
- 207th Contest by A. L. Armocido - AM.
300 points, ended March 13, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW! What a poem and picture you presented here. This is a touching work here Emily. THANKS for sharing this!
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Egh! How gruesome! The direction you took this in really brought th picture to life in a way that I wouldn't have expected. I was hoping for something with much more to it though... more imagery and what not but I most definitley give you props for creativity.
Nice job, good luck.
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