We all start from it
A home; A place- Belonging.
We fly for freedom.
Author notes
I've never entered a haiku into a contest before. I guess we'll see how it goes...
A contest entry
- Poetry Challenge by elemental angel.
500 points, ended March 20, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Traditional Haiku & Senryu by liquidmindforever.
800 points, ended May 3, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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so if i havent said it befor im saying it now you should enter my friends contest http://allpoetry.com/contest/2399507
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no, you didn't say it before. And your friend's contest is closed.
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Ah, I like it. Could mean a few things, but yes, why is it we fly from that safety? I geuss in search of our own home, place, belonging.
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A wonderful take on the prompt and a haiku. Well done.
Bravo
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