Pushed to the brink
a useless bitch,
vindicaton craved
so many times;
no longer an option.
Jump with both feet
pile the dung, as always
over empty frame,
as insides spewed forth
long ago.
Peace in silence.
Author notes
"I'm six feet from the edge and I'm thinking,
maybe six feet ain't so far down"
- Creed
(37 words)
In a list
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired by Friday.
300 points, ended March 25, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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WHOAH!
This is some seriously powerful work, definitely stung.
I don't even know what else to say.
Thank you -
wow . pushed to the brink, a useless bitch,,are you having a bad hair day..tempestous writing very good luck x peter
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Holy Moly!!
Oy~~ What a Powerful piece You have versed and the energy just jumped off the page~
Marvelous take on the prompt
Wow!!
Another one to Love
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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wow i love how you got this from the prompt. just strength and emotions in each word. well done gran
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oww, I love that song, good choice
great poem, in combination with that song!
emotions are very well written, keep on the good work! -
A very strong writ. Profound with great depth. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck. You've done a great job.
Kelli
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