By Blind Pathos
Sixty watts of warm gold
Raining from cold steel
Olive trauma green paint
Stares from black space
Rivets dressed in tears
Weep rust formations
Favor and function lost
A satisfaction of time
Flesh rots with bone
Coupling seconds in time
Born to want and need
Dies in error and loss
Thoughts left naked
Bound in yellow paper
Adopted segregate hearts
Adoringly polished till gone
A contest entry
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700 points, ended March 14, 16 entries
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Comments
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I can't even fathom where abouts this is to come into play in the contest. I do like the 3rd stanza the most. very abstract write. I am not sure what the statement is though. forgive me.
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