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Ageless

I was born with just a dirty face
And barely any thoughts to dwell upon
But now, unfairly, I've a dirty name
For all the innocence I had is gone

Once, not long ago, my thoughts were clean
Then tainted they became by things I'd done
So now my self-perception so obscene
Says I can't mean a thing to anyone

When birth gave me my ageless purity
I didn't think to thank it for the prize
And now, though too late, I begin to see
That age, for disgust, is our weak disguise

While watching aimless lives begin to waste
I wonder why all beauty is defaced.

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    aww wow, very thought prevoking and deep.
    lovelywrite and i enjoyed reading this alot
    keep it up and take care
    stephanie


  • Laken
    March 18, 2008
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    I love it


  • alyssaxo
    March 13, 2008

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    woah, that was a realllly good write. you're so talented, not fair. well, i liked this a lot. and you should never ever ever stop writing. :]