A galaxy filled with worlds
Shining stars in clusters of golden hue
Reality as we see it
Spirit close and protective
Angels wings surround us
Fact or fiction for debate
Electricity unseen yet so powerful
But accepted as fact
Television…Does it just appear?
Does it just work in your house?
just like that? Just like magic?
Electricity the unknown
Has to be accepted for the
Ability to watch TV
Turn on a light
Cook food or Run the fan
We blindly accept it as there
There is no lesser power
than belief when results are seen
There is only proof or results
The Earth is real we are on it
It came to be so that we could be on it
It was created so that man had a place to learn
Angels roam in their different world
Just because we don’t see them
We cannot deny their presence
Just as we cannot deny electricity
on which we so desperately rely
we cannot deny this earth was created
No matter how
No matter when
It was created for man
By an almighty power
The power that is the universe
Our Powerful God
No other way is possible. He created it all
For the benefit of many on this planet and others
God is Universal. Call him what you like.
He is our electricity
The unseen force that we have no choice
but to believe in
Because he is all powerful
Because he is felt and through him we have light
And because he is known to man
Through deeds and actions
But we are not the only ones
He has created so many more
We still have to travel far
In spirit we will move on
Man will see the universal power
Man in spirit will roam freely
And know that Earth was a gift
That he as man has not been grateful for.
This is my view
A contest entry
- Intelligent Design (Your opinion) by aslanlight.
600 points, ended March 30, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Not convinced
As a practising Christian I still feel that it's human arrogance to say that the world was created just for man. If so why is 'man' trying his best to destroy it. Sorry, not really the place to discuss this, but I feel I have to say it. Having got that off my chest, it is extremely well written and as you say, and have a perfect right to say, it is your view, and I respect that.
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And it's an applaudible view! I'm glad you brought the electricity and God together because until then it was almost as though I was reading two different poems in one vein. The last stanza powerfully finishes off the poem beautifully.
Peace Georgia
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WONDERFUL!!!!!
There are as many different beliefs as there are people on the earth. And most do believe in one God in one form or another. Just because we cannot see before us anything does not mean that there is not something there. I do believe there must be a higher power and that he did create all.
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Wow!
This is a beautiful write so full of wonder and inspiration. "Men in spirit will roam freely and know that earth was a gift." I especially love that. Very well written..blessings, Patty
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