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Peace within

Missing image
There's a silence
beautifully placed
in between thoughts

only here
in the quiet of mind
do things mirror themselves ~
                                               still

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  • Karl Weiss - Topaz gold member
    March 13
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    Nice

    Great wording on this prompt, good luck in the contest.


  • tony yates silver member
    March 13

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    very well written

    this work is exceptional, the standard is that of published poetry by famous poets. you are so talented - keep trying, i like your work, well done friend
  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 13

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    this is so beautifully written your words soft with such a gentle peace in them. well done mummy with this