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Yet Love Remains

Missing image

Clamoring to attain finer relevance

in decadence that eludes most,

class distinctions seem to pervade

save one single notion, romance.

 

Built to suit wealth and fame are

many monuments of greed

that carries the patina of time,

crumbling slowly,

 

but yet standing the rigorous test

of unkind years, is a construct that was

fashioned by divine hands and

welcomes eternity.

 

The draw of carnal affection 

is powerful, and no pomp and ceremony

is required when love is desired

without preconceptions and

 

longing is blindly lifted to heights

that sees few limits for spirits

entwined in sensual bliss with

no need for riches.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Well done. So pleased to see a trophy on this piece. Congratulations. ~Pamela


  • darell silver member
    March 20

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    Exquisite!

    Congratulations on constructing such
    a fine piece of literary art.
    Your imagination and creative ability
    soared to heights of grandeur.
    This was passionate and meaningful.
    Nice work indeed!


  • Ithica silver member
    March 19

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    The imagery and the ideals are fused seamlessly with a dusting of romance for good measure. Intuitive and inciteful. Excellent vocabulary too! Very Nice! ~ Ithica

  • Blue Rew silver member
    March 18

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    Well done with pulling the quote and image together for a fluid and focused read. I did enjoy the use
    of vocabulary! Blue
  • And this is why I have you as one of my favorites. Brilliant write, awesome picture. J


  • adsaige gold member
    March 13

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    *nods head*

    so...captivating. the entire time
    i was staring opened-mouth at the screen
    and figured out eventually i had to
    comment on this amazing piece.

    you are truly one of my favorite writers on
    this site.

  • Faithbound gold member
    March 13

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    I enjoyed this as well. The internal rhyme gave a good beat to the piece.

  • Wow brilliant pic, wish I had seen it first lol

    Wot powerfully strong loving sensual even a few glimpses of erotic, writing

    Great wrok Dad

    I do hope you do well in the contest



    Cin

  • oh i love how yo got this from the picture it is so everly writteh with such passion in each word. it is beautiful well done daddy. love you

  • Interesting thoughts you've let loose this time, but as always, expressed with a passion and intensity that leaves me in awe of your ability.

    My best wishes to you in the contest.



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