Defined pathways
through life's still oceans,
will not guide you
to the horizon of your dreams.
Stormy weather
and passionate encounters
make embracing the vision,
intense and priceless.
Grasp divergence.
Author notes
Prompt: (30 words) http://jjuuhhaa.deviantart.com/art/Mer-De-Miroir-38714438
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A contest entry
- Pic Prompt 4 by Seeking Peace.
800 points, ended March 22, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - magic in words by transit.
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a good piece penned, ah yes we have to weather the storms to find the gold and silver treasures of our dreams.
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This is beautifully written, with a wonderful flow of words. We always have path ways to go down weather it is the right or wrong choice. It was a pleasure to read.
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short and marvelous. just what i love.
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Make Your Own Path
wow i like this poem, it's spectacular!!! congrats on the silver! anyway, the picture of the sunset is very pretty! have a nice day, -Slick
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wow!
I like the abstract theme of this poem. It can be interpreted in many ways which makes it beautiful. The picture really did take my breath away. it gives a sense of hope.
a lot is said in very few words. Good luck!
love,
transit
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A truly beautiful piece, wonderful take on the picture. Superbly penned, good luck in the contest with it
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Fantastic take on the pic.. and this piece had an inspiring feeling about it... loved it
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the wisdom within your words speaks alot of truths that many may think over the imagery is beautiful well done gran
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I Love Your Poetry!
Another excellent piece weaved with vivid imagery, and well used vocab that draws the reader into each line to each verse. Thanks for sharing sweet soul. Much love and light, and all the best in the contest!
-Timothy
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