She is all I want
She is all I need
She is the one I never want to leave
She is my everything
The missing piece
With out her I’m not hole
She is everything to me
There will never be
Someone that can hold a candle to the light she brings to me
I don’t want to see
What the world would be like if I never meet thee
No one has ever made me
Want to be better like she
No one will ever see
The love I have
And can never show
How much she means to me
I just wish I cold find away
That we could be
Together and finally
We will know if I can be
The one for you
Like you are for me.
A contest entry
- Love like no other by okadadokie.
680 points, ended April 24, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful write, so deep and truely written well. sorry for the delay.
~Oka/KC -
this is strong and very good
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thanks
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Welcome to Allpoetry
A very lovely poem of love and I hope things turn out the way you want them to.
You have a mixture here of some free verse and some rhyme. They tend to clash. You need to do either one or the other when writing a poem.
A helpful part of the site is spellckeck. You can use it just before you submit. It also helps if you reread your poem for mistakes as well.
Thanks for sharing
If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
Gaylene
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