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Desires [Modulus Form]

Desires

Wanting to feel your touch

Sweating bodies filled with hot passions

.

Delights

Juices are flowing

Hot and sweet; tasting so divine

.

Ah

Your luscious lips

Two intertwining as one

Hearts pounding; heavy breathing

Moaning loudly

Yes

.

Eroticism at its best

Intensity builds

Lusting

.

In unison; rhythmic pulsations

Backs arching, names cried out

Releasing

Author notes

9. Erotica. Give me some good stuff! I want you to make me crave it! I don't mind explicit erotica in the least bit.

Hope you like it. Typically, my erotic writes are very explicit. Sometimes, i have been critized but oh well. I decided to soften the tone a touch here. A little naughty to allow the reader to go wherever he or she wants with it...

Modulus Poetic Form
by David R. Hall aka Poetic-Theorem
All rights reserved

Modulus Form I

Modulus 3
Syllables (3, 6, 9, 2, 5, 8, 1, 4, 7 )
9 Lines and 45 Syllables Total

Modulus 7
Syllables (7, 4, 1, 8, 5, 2, 9, 6, 3 )
9 Lines and 45 Syllables Total

(3, 6, 9, 2, 5, 8, 1, 4, 7, 7, 4, 1, 8, 5, 2, 9, 6, 3)

18 Lines and 90 Syllables total

Want to learn more about my Modulus form,
Check out my column at...

http://allpoetry.com/column/2341039

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Comments


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    Love the sensuality in this!! And you've worked it into your form wonderfully!

    Rapturous wee write indeed!


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    LOVE the form!

    Yes, I know... I promised you I'd check this new form out. I haven't forgotten (sorry, it's been a rough week).

    Anyway, you are so brilliant!!! David, you are a pioneer of poetry - and are capable of writing in every form imaginable. Talk about versatility! I'm so proud of you!

    By the way, I did not find this the least bit distasteful or explicit (and I don't recall your erotica ever being such - now my stories - those are explicit and distasteful!).

    Absolutely wonderful! Very ... ahem... inspiring... to say the least!

    Thanks for the awesome entry!!! Always a pleasure to read one of your fine writes.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    March 13, 2008

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    Oh this is a beautiful form and the content is steaming hot..tastefully so
    Hon, you did very well!
    Wishing you the very best in this contest as I think it deserves the very best!!!


  • Desire gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    Wow~~


    Drops

    Oh My Word~ Your other half knows how to get the Inspiration flowing~ What a piece You have penned
    and of course in such a unique form~
    Wooooooooo Hooooooooooooo


    HOT~ and much HEAT You have brought through!!
    Bravo!!!
    No picture needed for the images in Your words
    already singed my eyebrows
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~