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You Chose Immortality

you didn't quit
when you said it was going to kill you
this is it
blame it on them like you always do

in the truth
you tell only lies
i can hear the youth
and all their sacred cries

you made them tremble
when they fell off of their feet
so terrible...
you promised a new life and somehow skipped a beat

did they know?
that you took their souls instead?
let it flow
like you're already dead

they've come back
to hurt you now
so old today you veered off track
the only question left is how?

it's caught up so quick
behind you is a riot
turn it off with a flick
let it all go quiet

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