Is that some chicken and ham too?
O pass the turkey and stuffing.
Thats Good bread and sweat corn.
Is there more dressing for the salad?
Wow desert already what is it?
Man that was some good cake.
OK so I'm ready for the next part.
What do you mean aren't I done yet?
I think I could go for some duck.
Wow I want some of what that guys got.
Could you get me some of that honeycomb.
Why did you guys stop eating?
Is there anymore of that stuffed cabbage?
Hay guys don't get up I'll be done soon.
Now were did I put that drum stick.
This is some good wine I'll take some home.
Why didn't anyone tell me there was fried rice?
Those potatoes hit the spot all right.
OK , OK guys we can leave all right.
But were coming back for dinner right?
Author notes
I'm Beautiful-Nightmare and i wouldn't mind to hear what you think.
A contest entry
- Seven Deadly Sins - THIRD AND FINAL ROUND by Crazy9Piano8Freak.
900 points, ended March 26, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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another great write although i'm kind of lost as to what sin this revolves around... message me and tell me or change the poem a bit so i know which one it is. thanks! good job and keep writing...
Koko
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