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Spine Tingling

Glistening palms
lips
strip
tease straps on skin
that's all we really were
Deep breaths
in the midst of sin.

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♥ Not as good as usual, but I tried. =]

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  • nichtmich silver member
    March 31, 2008

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    Spine tingling indeed! Sensual and just a subtle hint of risque. I like it very much, I just wish there was a little bit more!


  • AmazinJason
    March 25, 2008
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    pretty good


  • autumns rising
    March 13, 2008
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    beautiful!
    love this sisssy