I don’t understand why you do such things
At the time you did it I was only fourteen
With such force you cut and hit
You raped and unzipped
What did I ever to deserve such pain
No reason at all, now I have shame
You’ve caused most problems I now have today
Thinking about you hurting me makes me sway
When you climbed into bed and laid by my side
You whispered in my ear “shh lets not cry”
You told me not wake the sleeping people
Every second you were there made me weaker
Now I don’t trust one single soul
All because of you, my innocence you stole
I could never hurt you enough to make you see
All the pain your actions inflicted on me
A contest entry
- Family Dispute by MasochisticallyJess.
300 points, ended March 25, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Wit-torical Hatred by Minstrel Knight.
300 points, ended June 8, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A contest entry for a lovely friend of mine X]
Comments
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While this was fairly well written, I wasn't really feeling the hate here. This contest is for poems about hatred, and while I can see some here, that doesn't seem to be the focus of the poem.
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wife!
that was so heartfelt, who was the jack-ass who did it? not my woman! -
You left a few words out, but the point still came across. I thought this was sad but thought provoking. Some people need a dose of the reality that goes on around them. Good job!
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This was amazing.
The way you set it out, the words. the descriptions.
Incredibly raw emotions.
♥
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Good poem. A tad depressing, but good.
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Awe, that's sad.
Sad and very well written.
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ummm
whoever was raped?
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