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you said I paint you flawless

Brush strokes don't do justice
to your artistic pose.
  My lines shake
                  nervous from undisturbed, long moments of staring  ( I watch you      and
                                  you      gaze  back;
eyes never faltering )

  No color can reveal your vivid nature
nor medium can capture
                  your intoxicating laughter.

You said I paint you flawless

I replied,
          it's only because you are.


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  • LanguishedLad
    March 17, 2008

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    thanks

    Thankyou for the entry, very well penned and so much said with few words. Thankyou for your entry and best of luck in the contest.