Clouds float through the azure sky
fish swim down below,
crystal clear waters
such brilliant beauty they show.
Sunset makes the perfect picture
another day has passed by,
awaiting for the warmth of tomorrow
and look toward the sky.
Serene calm, at it's very best
time to sit and take a rest.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.12/2008
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lovely observation from the picture thanks for entering
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Nice write Cynthia, Very good images. I like the serene calmness that you use to describe the scene. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
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Awesome!
Well done, this poem has me feeling relaxed. Great take on the prompt!! Best of luck in this contest!!!
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I didn't look at the picture, but it wasn't necessary, a poem should be able to stand on its own...and yours does. What I want is a lawn chair to sit out under the sky and watch the clouds drift by...and that's what your poem provides.
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I imagine the picture to be
I don't see the picture, but from what i've read
If I connect the dots, I'll unravel whats said
a lake in the picture, the water dead calm
a single fish jumping, a bird sings its song
clouds are billowing, about half of the sky
sitting on a dock, lifes a wonderful high
mountains in the background, snow on the top
two watching a sunset, behind the peakss drop
rudolf
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Such a calming refreshing poem. Very lovely.
Lady D
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