That's all I am,
failing to show you how much,
I care,
I love you,
I would do anything.
I try to show,
that your the only one,
you say you don't want to share me,
but your not.
I am a failure,
I really shouldn't be on this earth,
I'm sorry,
I'm trying to be better.
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option 7....jungle fever
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well done!
I am an acid-tounged finesse monger and i find nothing wrong here ...keep doing your best and there will always be better things in life for you than failure.... from what i have read you are anything but.
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well thank you....i feel like a failure most of the time but its nice to know theres people who think otherwise...lol...it was nice to get a comment like this..thank you
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This is a sad poem. I'm sure you are a wonderful person. hope that you can see that you aren't a failure. That sometimes you may struggle, sometimes you may fail, but in the end you will prevail. In the end you will overcome all your failures, you will become a successful person. Don't give up hope!
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