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A Suggestion

The guessing and second guessing of origin
or creation is at best ignorantly perverse,
but one surety in this "indigestiqua"
of existence is absolute and certain,
if intelligent design is revealed not to be the origin
it definitely does damn well as suggestion toward our solution!

Author notes

"indigestiqua" is a word i fell in love with... find it in the latin version of Ovid's "Metamorphosis", first few lines... it describes the original 'chaotic' state of the universe before order and form existed.

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  • aslanlight
    March 30, 2008
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    Why is it ignorantly perverse to question the origins of the universe? Just curious. Yes that is a good word, I'll have to try and remember it. I don't get the last two lines, they seem to contradict each other. Nevertheless your use of language is good and it's an intelligent write.

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