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Monopoly

You said that I deserved so much better than you, yet the game just kept going.
And I, the unwitting player, gave you my everything, my heart and soul.
You were just going through the motions.

It is probably better this way, but that doesn't make it any easier.

You were what my life consisted of, and I never knew until you won the game.
You were so entwined into my daily routine, that I never knew...
I simply expected things to stay the same, perpetuated in my stubborness and your inability to quit.

I know what it is like to be lonely now.
I have undeniably lost to you; you with all of the real-estate, board-walk and Park place, and I, stuck with the lowly electric company.

You were never very good for me, and you told me that.
And I never cared.
I just went on, believing that you were for real when you said the three magic words.
Little did I know, you were getting ready to fold up the board, and put away the paper money memories and start playing a new game with someone that you've beaten before.

I nearly impaled your head with that little metal doggie.

Author notes

This was inspired by the sytlings of a fabulous poet on here, by the name of QueenTakesJack, my newly found friend.

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  • InfiniteAbsolution
    March 17, 2008

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    Ohh baby, i love this and you. seriously.

    "Little did I know, you were getting ready to fold up the board, and put away the paper money memories and start playing a new game with someone that you've beaten before."

    i know how you feel.. when your dumped for an ex. like its he worst, most low thing ever..and it hurts a million times more.

    i loveee the form of theis poem, it worked out perfectly for max emotional effect.

    umm did i mention that i love you?
    <33


    • Nutrition
      March 18, 2008
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      <3
      Thanks.
      Veryveryveryvery much.
      I love you too!
      :]