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Return To Me

Return to me, I can't bear you so far away.
It is as if part of me is over there,
Hoping and praying that you are okay
And wishing that this was all just a dream.

I know that you are doing what you have to do
But that does not make it any easier for me,
Or change how badly I miss you.
It just gives me reason to pray even harder.

Come back, because in my arms is where you belong.
We were made to be together forever,
And you have already been gone way too long.
So come home soon, and bring my heart back with you.

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  • Pollycheck
    April 12, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my military contest. I am sure that these sentiments are felt by almost every military wife that has to watch her husband leave or military husband that watches hiswife leave.


  • peridotPixi
    April 7, 2008
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    i really like this poem, as an army wife i compleatly realate mine just got back in Dec and they are looking to go back sometime soon, im not thrilled, but i guess thats how it is, this poem has a great flow and also says so much, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -amy


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    April 1, 2008

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    Thank you for sharing your favorite poem with me, best of luck in the contest.


    whisper


  • cutekitten789
    March 14, 2008

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    wow...words every heart says at the end of the day...or anytime really... i know the second verse s so much what i feel... it truely touched me