Baby, I love the way you look at me
The way you smile when I walk through the door
I love everything about you
The way your eyes shine when you see me
Love the way my heart beats when you come close
Baby, when you take my hand, it starts to tingle
I love the warmth you provide
Love the sense of protection I feel with your arms around me
Baby, everything you do makes me dizzy
I love just talking to you for hours on end
Talking about nothing in particular
Love the way you whisper "I love you" and mean it
Baby, everything about you is perfect
You have this sense of self-confidence all around you
I love the way you squeeze my hand tight when I'm nervous
I love how you know what I'm feeling
Baby, I just love you
A contest entry
- Love, Love, Love. No PW by LanguishedLad.
700 points, ended March 17, 2008, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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well penned
Thankyou for the entry, while reading it put a smile on my face, well composed with the emotion in it. Thanks again for the entry and best of luck in the contest
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This piece is so beautiful and romantic in a cute way! Your detail is exhibited very well through your words and you say so much with a few words. Some poets would take a couple more stanzas to say all you've said here. lol...This piece was lovely and I hope you truly feel this way!
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ahhh man... i love your poems
im soooo jealous
good luck in the contest!
loves you sooo much- your bffl
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