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Forever Eighteen

Forever eighteen,
to this earth,
I'll be seen,
but not in my
momma's eyes.

She'll watch from below,
as in heaven
I grow,
I'll meet her
at sunrise.

Forever to stay,
through out
the day,
walking by
her side

I may be gone,
but through her,
I live on;
love
intensified.

On my 23rd

I won't be heard,

but try to feel my

presence

 

I'll be there

with you to share,

all of my birthday

presents!



Author notes

I can't imagine losing a child...I only have one...
Blessings, peace and love to you and yours!
*PEACE*

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  • TexasMomma
    March 12, 2008

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    beautiful words you have penned for me! Thank you for entering and I wish you luck in my contest...this piece gave me a really good feeling!
    God Bless You, Ellan


    • islekine gold member
      March 13, 2008
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      If you get a chance...read my poem unconditional

      I may change the last line....
      to not at birth, or death.
      Take care!
      Thanks for commenting...and the contest..
      if that is your picture...you don't look old enough to be bubba's mom!
      *PEACE*