Endless love,
timeless touch.
Love forever,
did you know?
You send chills,
through my spine.
Lay here with me,
I'll hold you close.
Breathe in
breathe out;
I hear you sigh.
Heart is pounding.
Head is racing.
I hold you close,
you lean against me.
The stars shine,
just for us.
Words aren't needed,
you know what I'd say.
Endless love,
timeless touch.
Love forever,
did you know?
Today and forever,
we'll be together.
Never will I leave.
You are part of me,
and that is how it will stay.
Please don't talk,
please just listen.
I need to tell you.
I love you.
Wait, don't speak;
just listen.
You make it hard
for me to breathe.
I love you
and I know
you love me too.
Endless love,
timeless touch.
Love forever,
did you know?
Lost in your eyes,
come and stay with me;
until the end of time.
Author notes
Inspired by "Breathe" by Angels and Airwaves! The most awesomenessical song ever! Anywayz... Hope you enjoyed this one. ^.^
The last two lines or so were very nearly direct quotes from the song. ^.^ I love that song. The part that even got me to think of this train of thought is this.
"Did you know,
that I love you?
Come and lay with me.
I love you."
A contest entry
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Judging:
- Title: it firts perfect with the poem.
- Is it what I am looking for? Yes it is.
- Emotions: Full of love, pure and beatiful love.
- Wowness: Good wowness
- Final word: Its perfect, I dont have to say anything els!
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This poem is cute, I like it ^^
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Allright, now THIS is a really awesome poem!!!! This is awesomest!!! La poesia es muy fantastica!!!
Nice job and good luck in the contest!!!!
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well done
Hey, good job!! I really really liked this. I'd pick out a specific part that i like the most but I love all of it. You did a really good job.
Thanks for entering and good luck
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