Words can speak a heart's desire
but only if you let them
Dear lover, come sit by my side
let your worries just float away
forget about the past and tomorrow
because we are here, right now, today
Dear lover, please take my hand
let me ease your worried mind
dirft away into sweet memories
that aren't so hard to find
Dear lover, look into your heart
tell me where you long to be
you can have everything you want
let your dreams be your reality
Dear lover, I'm right here
waiting for your voice
you know what you have to say
you know that it's your choice
Words can speak a heart's desire
but only if you let them
Ok, what do you think? I need feedback! Should I only put the "words can...." at the end? Or leave it like it is? Any other suggestions?
Comments
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i like the way that this is. and yes, i will let you
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This is a really good poem. I LOVE IT ♥ i really like the whole thing and i cant chose a favorite part. And you have such a way with your words.
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i love it the way that it is! well, that is this 15 yr old's opinion...but...i still like it alot!!
"Words can speak a heart's desire
but only if you let them" <- favourite line
"Dear lover, I'm right here
waiting for your voice
you know what you have to say
you know that it's your choice" <- actually telling someone this...
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