A sweater makes it better when it's cold outside,
Not twill or leather, or some other rawhide.
A sweater makes it better when snow covers the yard,
when there,s bitter weather, and the cold bites hard.
A sweater makes it better when I get the Goose Bumps.
the air is grey and wetter, and I'm down in the dumps.
A sweater makes it better when it's cold outside,
I really love my sweater, and the warmth it provides.
Author notes
A Kiddie Poem.
A contest entry
- The Knit Knot Tree by ea.
475 points, ended March 23, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
An honest citique is well accepted
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Excellent
Wonderful creation for the contest. A great kiddie poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Not just for Kiddies!
I love this. It makes me all kinda cozy & comfy! One thing though: when there,s bitter weather, and the cold bites hard. How'd the apostrophe become a comma? LOL...that's the way I feel right now...upside down! Nice job. Trust you'll do famously in this contest!
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This is so cute, both as a kiddie poem that a child might recite themselves as they put on that extra layer oh so begrudgingly, (as mom stands by and insists
) and as a poem being told by the Knit Knot Tree itself.
I have heard that people are placing poems in the "sleeves" of the Knit Knot Tree and am wondering how to get these there...
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fix your apostrophe's lol was your tooth pain that bad think you need a sweater for your tooth. Good luck
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Yes, a sweater is sweeter..
Nice job Ram.
I bet you repeat these as you put the kids sweaters on huh?
Paul
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