It's alright Momma,
try not to cry.
I never left you,
I'm here at your side.
Standing by you,
day in and day out.
Protecting you from all the bad things,
that may come about.
Micheal and Haley,
are here with me too.
We want to say how very much,
We Love You!
We are always with you,
even though you cannot see.
If you listen hard enough,
you might hear our wings.
So, on my birthday,
try not to weep.
For in your heart,
I will always be.
Author notes
Written for TexasMomma at http://allpoetry.com/TexasMomma
For you TexasMomma. You mentioned it could be from him to you and this instantly hit me.
Bless you always,
Crystal
In a list
A contest entry
- A Poem In Memory Of My Deceased Son For His 23rd Birthday "contest" by TexasMomma.
875 points, ended March 31, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 1000 points, 1000 pws by Shadow Anonymised.
1000 points, ended November 23, 1058 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So, on my birthday,
try not to weep.
Interesting, it makes me wonder why she's crying.
Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest, very sweet and touching.
6/10
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beauty
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As for why she's crying, they are dead.
We are always with you,
even though you cannot see.
If you listen hard enough,
you might hear our wings.
Thanks for your contest and comment take care.
Crystal
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amazing write! i loved the flow! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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aww I've never read this!! It's so beautiful!! I loved this, congrats on the trophy and good luck in this next contest!!!
Love ya!
~Michaela~
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This is beautiful darling. Good luck.
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thank you. best of luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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TexasMomma is a fantastic person. .. Well in all honesty she is much more than that... she is so strong, beautiful and talented... in many ways. I think this was a marvelous dedication, very sad but so inspiring. Well done love... this really was wonderful. Great job and good luck in the contest.
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I'm so proud of you Crystal!!! You are learning that you can write beautifully created pieces. I have great faith in you darling!!!
Love always, Mom.
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This truly brought tears to my eyes...thank you for including Michael and Haley...their mother is on crack and Haley's father is also on crack...Michael never knew his father...so no one includes Michael and Haley much in memory or conversation...I mad them a small website linked to my son's site...I helped raise them too so I almost feel like I lost 3 children! beautiful piece here with lots of feeling! thanks for entering and good luck!
God Bless You,Ellan
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