Why did you have to go?
What did you really need?
Is there something that happened a long time ago
That made you feel trapped, or unfree?
Is “I love you” suddenly a vile slang
That means, “I never want to see you again”?
If that’s what it means, I’m sorry,
I really didn’t know
But why oh why did you have to go?
Why did you need to go?
It really just isn’t fair
The loss, the pain, the suffering
It’s way too much to bear
Actions speak louder than words
And I know I’ve heard a lot
I know that things weren’t perfect
Sometimes we even fought
If I knew how bad it hurt you
I promise the fights wouldn’t continue
I’m just so sorry, I really didn’t know
But why oh why did you need to go?
Why did you want to go?
Or did you just feel forced?
Do you feel bad for your decision?
Is there any hidden remorse?
As what do I classify, an utter disgrace?
Did you only see failure when you looked at my face?
I don’t like this treatment
I didn’t do a dang thing wrong
Am I something you regret?
Or is your ego just too strong?
Are you ever going to apologize?
Or am I nothing in your eyes?
I don’t want to care anymore
But I really want to know
Why, oh why, oh WHY… did you want to go?
Author notes
Message me. If if know you or get to know you, I'll tell you what it's all about. It's so funny, everybody that read this poem assumed it was about boy, or puppy love, or somebody I'm "too good for". It's not like that at all. I'm not your average everyday girl who drools over every boy that comes within ten feet of her. they aren't worth my time.
So...how did I do?
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Tell me what this is about b/c I NEED to know. Since I know you by the end I didn't think it was about a guy.
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This is sad depressing and sounds like my life!! Ahh!! have you been reading my mind. lol. I wish I could write my feelings down in words as you have. Mature.. Sorry.. I read the last comment and that person is going to drive me crazy. They can't spell.lol. Anyway this was a lovely write. Keep up the good job. I haven't seen you on in what seems like forever. Keep up the great job.
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lol you're so sweet (;
Dani I've missed you! It's so weird no matter what age you are something happens and you feel, like, completely defenseless! Humans are prone to pain sometimes, and while some express that pain in other ways, whether appropriate or not, I write and now I feel soooooo much better. Thank you for your comment
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Yeah I'm finally back on here. It felt like forever. Well I will keep reading your stuff so keep posting!!
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This is a very sad poem sweetie. I mean you are tlqaking about heart break at such a young age and where the boy is afriad of commitment and he is not ready to embrace the words I Love You that comes from the heart. To me its all about merchurity I mean you have to be merchure to commit to a real long lasting relationship of this proportions to drop the I Love You in the relationship. Any ways at first this often reminded me of puppy love but then again puppy love cna become true love if both commit to it. any ways a very powerful poem and its sad that this has happened with you but keep up the good work though and thanks for sharing this. Sincerely, Paul =)
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No guy is worth the trouble of it all (no offense).
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