What do I do
When I can’t deny
My feelings
They just won’t die
The jealousy
gets under my skin
And pretty soon
My heart starts to win
My brain
Feels so confused
My soul
Feels so abused
Pure happiness
Feels like a crime
The chills
Run up my spine
My voice
Talks with no sound
My life
Is turned around
My blood
Just feels so cold
Bad karma
Comes back tenfold
My body
Just cannot move
My nerves
Will not be soothed
My mind
Has gone berserk
My feet
Don’t want to work
My heart…
Just can’t go on
The trigger is pulled…
I’m finally gone.
Author notes
I WAS BORED! And it was raining, I had a right to be depressed. I don't mean medically though. Comments please! ***I didn’t want the last two lines, but that’s all I could think of. This poem is a complete work of fiction. Thank you.***
So...how did I do?
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Amazin .. totally ... I can feel those words, very strong and compassioned, sadness is one of the worst emtions ever, Grt piece and good job
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Aw thank you, I'm glad you felt it, I want my poems to speak to people
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Very interesting write you have here jess. I've enjoyed reading this. Lately I've been very depressed.. I probably could be medically diagnosed lol. Well keep up writing.
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:D
Thank youu
I've been depressed lately too.
What is up with us this year, is it "Crazy Mormons" month and I don't know about it? A bunch of my other LDS friends are acting weird as well.
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