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What can I do

What can I do
When I start to cry
I can’t stop
I don’t know why
The suffering
Will never stop
And pretty soon
My lifeline starts to drop
My eyes
Are full of tears
My life
Is losing years
My childhood
Is completely gone
I just don’t know
What I’ve done wrong
My feelings
Are eternally bruised
I don’t know
What I should do
What’s wrong?
My friends will ask
But I say nothing
And fake a laugh
I just
Can’t live this way
Don’t want to live
Another day
I scream
I’m never heard
They don’t
Listen to a word
I’m getting out of here
Maybe they’ll see
What life would be like
Without me.

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I don't feel this way...really, I don't.

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  • DeadlyPoetic88
    March 17, 2008

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    I think somewhere deep down you do feel this way. When we say we don't we really do... Okay enough of that. Believe me I've been here. lol I've been everywhere gosh. teenagers. lol Im 19 almost 20 and I still act like this.


    • kissjess
      March 17, 2008
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      You're probably right

      I guess there are some times when we all just want to run away. Haha you sound so wise! Parents are older so they tend to forget what it's like to be a teenager. But yeah... thanks!