Another smile
and she's not even saying anything
(my heart is flutterng
my stomach is in knots)
I just lost my breath at the sound of her voice
~L~O~V~E~
and I've [never] been so happy
I swear I hear her voice in the wind
and stony limits wont make me stop loving you
because I do love you
and nothing will ever change that
because your my world
(all that I've got)
you're everything to me
my everything
something I know will always be there
when I dont even want to be here
&&
you make life so much better
I actually want to get up in the morning
|te amo|
&&
you're the reason I smile everyday
iloveyou
we were made for each other
I was constructed from left over materials
from you
so in the future
we could be together
two things torn
whole together
now && forever
A contest entry
- My love's birthday by Meroza.
425 points, ended March 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Thank you for favouring me! =) by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended March 26, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well??
Comments
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Judging:
- Is it what I am looking for? I honestly do not know.
- Emotions: Total confusion.
- Wowness: Poor.
- Final word: Sorry but I really do get frustraited with reading this, I feel like the words are all over the page and not where they should be. I really did strugle to read this.
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Awww this is so sweet and beautiful... I wish someone would write something special for me...lol, but naw seriously this is a beautiful piece hon, keep it up
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This poem is very sweet but the placings of the words makes me a bit confused, may just be me but its still cute ^^
Best of luck
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