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Farfalle fetched

Farfalle fetched
and egg noodle etched
Lasagne joking
rasta smoking
God is only
rigatoni

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Tongue in cheek. And put me down for the curry...!

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  • aslanlight
    March 27, 2008

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    I simply love a bit of silliness! And this poem's quite exquisite with its....oh I'm too tired to remember what it's called when you use words that sound the same!

    Now a rasta smoking lasagne'd have to be joking!

    Peace Georgia


  • internal heights
    March 19, 2008
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    I've read this poem again and again and it truly never ceases to make me smile. I can't tell if its just the pure and simple silliness or the fact there are some deep, mysterious poetic secrets that force the muscles in my face to grin. Thanks for the great read and for reading and appreciating a new guy like me.


    • chills gold member
      March 20, 2008
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      It is so very silly. It was a quick reaction to Aslanlight's contest on 'Intelligent Design'. She and I had a huge amount of messaging on the subject. Shame the resulting write was so short - more like macaroni...!!! Short and thick! Please read 'Spanner in the Works' if you liked this. That's even sillier. xx