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It's that simple--♥

Forget about me. It's that simple.

Take my heart please;
Show me that you still care.
Or forget about me.
Walk away. It's that simple.

It always was.

So steal my tears &&
replace them with novacaine.
You pull my strings && tug.
on my strings. You're here in
my mind, but gone with my heart♥

Forget about me. It's that simple.
It always was.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 13

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    I know that feeling babe. But unfortunately, sometimes guys will still take the route of breaking us.


  • Live 4 the Moment
    June 22, 2008

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    Sad but I particularly liked these lines the most…
    so steal my tears &&
    replace them with Novocain.

    I really liked the way you revealed the desire to numb the pain.


    -angg =)


  • HaileeDear
    March 15, 2008

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    This is so sad. I hate seeing/hearing people having to go through things like this. I'm always looking to help someone and OHMIGOSH you're from england which i think is totally kickass. hit me up.
    xoxo
    pixie


    • over the rainbow--x
      March 15, 2008
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      Thanks lol [=

      England isn't that great... it just always rains on us lol

      Thanks for the comment [= [=

      ♥


  • Dancing Marionette
    March 14, 2008

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    so the first thing i though of was your own disaster, and just thinking about that song made this piece even more sad. you are an amazing writer bby. &hearts.

  • Theory Of The Lost
    March 12, 2008

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    Well it's always that simple, because only one person gets hurt (You) persay. Very well Written, I love the words you used; very strong yet simple. Very well done. Hope all is well


  • c e ll a r . d oo r
    March 12, 2008

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    i like your style a lot, but i don't like the repitition of the same thing from one line to the next, which i've noticed in a few of your pieces that i've read so far -- BUT i do get the feel that your pieces are extremely freewritten and probably don't go through an editing process, which is something i like a lot in poetry because i love raw material -- therefore it doesn't really matter. lol. but all in all, i love your work.

    and i relate to this piece a whole lot, i know the feeling of the push and pull where you wish they'd just make one decision or the other [do you want me, or no?] and the waiting is the most painful part. but i came to a big realization lately, think deep -- it's gonna hurt either way, right? but what's gonna be better for you in the end? to sit around and let the pain continue, or to move on yourself and eventually let the pain fade? i think the latter is the best choice, which is the choice i had to make *sigh* and honestly, the pain is starting to fade -- slowly. but surely.


    • over the rainbow--x
      March 14, 2008
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      Thanks, I do tend to repeat, I know. But I think I've only ever editted like once && that was for coursework. lol

      I probably should edit.

      Thanks for commenting [=
      ♥

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