I thought
I would find
eternity in your eyes,
but it was
just the reflection
of each sweet lie.
Author notes
prompt- That shine in your eyes is nothing more that oblivion peeking through.
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wow siss this is so short but greatly expressing
i enjoyed reading coz thats somehow what im in
i will read as much as i can for ur works sis
lvoe you loadssssss
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wow, this is a lovely poem, short and sweet...i think you did an outstanding job writting this poem, keep up your wonderful work!! I really loved it!
Becca
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SO HEART-FELT!!!
So often in todays society does this hold true!
I have had so many lies from others and also deceit. Wonderful expression of the prompt.
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This is a very nice take on the prompt thank you for taking the time to enteer my contest have a great evening best wishes
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Beautifully written. A mirror of our hopes finally shows the truth.
John
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Now, this is poetic beauty
underlined with the wisdom of knowledge that comes with human frailty, folly and foibles. Precise revelation of the practice of deceit.
A sure winner in my eyes.
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Beautiful!
Very well written. Succinct and powerful message about the deceipt so many practice with loved ones. Best of luck in the contest.
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Sad and Beautiful
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