O'er the course of love and time
Broken soul reaching out to find
Full understanding without a care
Gentle words dissolving a nightmare
Inspiring thoughts inciting action
Shared experience changes a fraction
Strength of love gives protection
Genuine and true a perfect illustration
Depth of gratitude not yet revealed
True emotions of the heart lie concealed
Fate has laid the course possibly a chance
God holds destiny in the palm of his hands
March 12, 2008
4:50 p.m.
Do you have someone like this?
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Faith
Faith can be such a powerful attribute and often that writer exalts their God with gracious words, such as this fine piece. And I, the nightmare, from lack of faith do envy such an attribute
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awww
This is a precious and sweet dedication to a treasured one. You are such a sweet young lady and I am honored to know you and to have been adopted as your AP daddy. Love you lots princess, Daddy
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A beautifully written piece, the rhyme and meter are fab. It just rolls of the tongue. Superbly penned tribute hunni
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Another beautiful poem that surrounds the heart and soul like the mist of rose monsoon embraces within its silky layers. great rhyming pattern....
my favourite lines:
"Strength of love gives protection
Genuine and true a perfect illustration"
I really enjoyed this write...keep writing...all the very best....thank you for creating and sharing such a lovely piece...
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this is a really good write sis i love this so much
and i love you with all my heart!
keep up the good work sis
love always
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Perfect sentiments expressed here hun... this is an amazing piece... I love it! We should not take it for granted that is for sure..
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I love the way this rhymes. Thumbs up sis!!!
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Ooooo I like this! You did a great job with this poem! Great job with the ryhme! love u
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Generously discribed a poem you revive
Taste like honey when read,sweet as a hive
Lucky is he the man who deserve such words
treated as a king or a elite of lords.
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