I shall take my revenge
Fly my prettys, fly!
Four and twenty black birds
Cascade out of their pie.
Suprise! Theres no gravy
The chorus began to sing;
'The pirate boys have gone all out
To impress their king'.
The lads, they grab their whiskey
The children find it funny
How a simple party trick
Could make them lots of money.
Charging by the six pence
The Queen looks up her nose;
Thinking its disgraceful
The king shouts 'There she blows!'
Author notes
tried to keep it to the original nursery rhyme....not many people have done that so far!
A contest entry
- Shred the nursery rhyme round 2 by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended March 19, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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hehe this is so fun and i love the way you have kept to the nursery rhyme.I love how you have written it with the menaing well done with his
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Ha! i love it, this is a great contest idea!
I love how you have kept the rhyme scheme of the origianl poem aswell....really nice touch babe!
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