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Lonely

i am a lonely soul
wandering in this world
i know not what is my role
thoughts in my head are curled

i can't get any sleep
not even just a bit
and then i go n start to weep
i feel my heart has split

part of me is happy
part of me is sad
part is full of misery
and another's really glad

i feel huge, tremendous pain
a pain i cannot bare
i truely think i'll grow insane
but still i do not care

comfort, pain or suffering
to me it's all the same
my life was never worth fixing
not until u came

i thought u were an illusion
i thought u were not real
u filled me with confusion
when yourself to me u did reveal

u lightened up my sky
and u became my moon
and then i stopped to cry
and i recovered soon

now that i have met u
u say u have to leave
please say it's not true
and u i shall beleive

please don't go and leave me
please don't go away
please don't u beleive me?
i wish that u could stay

just when i was happy
that u walked through the door
u left as unhappy
as i was before
(and sometimes even more)

now i feel my soul
as lonely as it could be
and i know that happiness
was never meant for me

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  • Guerrero
    November 14, 2008

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    happiness is meant for every one.. sometimes it just comes later to some than others.. i hope you find your happinesss.. nice job.. really great poem.. good luck in the contest


  • BAMItsRierie
    March 14, 2008

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    this one was REALLY good...I like the rhyme scheme (idk how to spell) The last stanza is sad but VERY powerful..Great write


  • Tazmanian Poet
    March 14, 2008

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    I like this alot.It is amazing.Good Job and keep writing so i can keep reading amazing stuff liek this..