In this enterprise we call
space
time
continuum
passage of moments
is defined
in blinks and links
not hours
time slips away,
has no meaning ,
is lost upon
dimensions
Author notes
choice one- picture prompt
A contest entry
- - Prompts Contest - PIF by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended March 12, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love the use of the word "enterprise" and "space" in juxtaposition
How can a poem be deep and cheeky at the same time? Do well in the contest.
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thank you Mairi, had not noticed the cheekiness before you mentioned it, now i like this piece even more..thanks for reading...peace
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isn't it funny well not funny ha ha but... when we are smiling in life time is blinked away yet when were in sorrow's relam time drags. it's all an illusion, there is no meaning as you say with time, it just is, it is a perception, something we labelled. a good poem.
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time flies when youre having fun as they say. you are right, time has no meaning other than our own perception of it...thanks for reading...peace
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I like this, very smooth but nicely written. I also like the background, kind of goes with the prompt itself, really. Nicely done.
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thank you ER
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Nice take on the prompt
Good luck
Simon
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thanks Simon, nicepic-very cerebral
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